Happy
Monday Everyone! Sorry things have been a little slow to start here (I did call
this blog "Writer's Block" for a reason...haha!) but thanks for
encouraging me to keep posting! I'm glad I have you all to remind me ...
otherwise I would probably put off working on this and possibly not complete
it! Thank you also for your very helpful critiques and advice. I've read over
the chapters so much, that I don't have a very fresh perspective. So it's very
helpful to receive feedback from those of you reading for the first time.
Anyway, a character that you will read a lot about in
Chapter 3 is Ellyn's brother Ivor, who I have cast as Freddie Stroma:
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| Freddie Stroma as Ivor |
To read
this chapter, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put
"Chapter 3" in the body of the message and I will give you access to
the chapter! Don't forget
- critiques are greatly appreciated. :) Thanks everyone! Have a great week!
I always look forward to reading this; it's so amazing! ;) A couple of small comments- towards the bottom of page 1, it says, 'but she be treated with care for a few weeks.' I think maybe you meant to put either 'she needs to be...' or 'she should be...' Another quick spelling on the top of page 2: 'he tears' is supposed to be 'her tears,' I think. :) Other than that, great job! I love your descriptions- they really paint the scene for me.
ReplyDeleteThanks for catching that Moriah... I just made the changes. :) Thank you!!
DeleteI love it Rachel! Great job. :)
ReplyDeleteI especially like how you added Julius's backstory. It makes so much more sense now!