Tuesday, December 16, 2014

Updates

Hi all!

Sooo, I'll be doing book reviews throughout 2015. I have several book challenges that I'm excited to do. So, an occasional book review will be popping up here and there. :) The first challenge I'm doing is Back to the Classics, hosted by Karen at Books and Chocolates (see her blog to the right :) I'll be participating in all 12 categories:

1) A 19th Century Classic
2) A 20th Century Classic
3) A Classic by a Woman Author
4) A Classic in Translation
5) A Very Long Classic Novel (500+ words)
6) A Classic Novella
7) A Classic With a Person's Name in the Title
8) A Humorous or Satirical Classic
9) A Forgotten Classic
10) A Nonfiction Classic
11) A Classic Children's Book
12) A Classic Play

Also, I have a new way set up for you to read my chapters when I post them. It may be a bit more of a hassle than before, but it's mainly to protect the privacy of my writing. So, if you would like access to a chapter, just send my a message via the contact form to the right. You don't need a lengthy message, just say "Chapter 10" or "Request for Chapter 5" (or whatever chapter you would like access too) and I will give you access to the document as soon as I get your message.

Last of all, you may be wondering why I haven't posted this week's chapter yet. It's coming, I promise! :D I will work to have it ready in the next few days. :)

Monday, December 8, 2014

Chapter 10

Hi everyone! I hope you're having a great Monday. :)

This post's character profile is Prince Corineus. He is Corbin's younger brother, he's around nineteen or so. I casted him as Colin Morgan:

Colin Morgan as Corineus
To read Chapter 10, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, just say "Chapter 10" and I will give you access to the chapter!

Tuesday, December 2, 2014

Chapter 9

I hope you all had a great Thanksgiving! Sorry for the delay in posting this chapter... editing takes longer than I thought it would! :) And we've been pretty busy lately. But I will try to go back to posting every Monday.

As always, feel free to give suggestions on ideas for the story. Sometimes, after reading the same passages over and over, I am unable to see it in a way that someone who is reading it for the first time can, so if you have any ideas even something as major as a completely different scene or conversation or something, I'd love to hear it! And grammar and spelling problems almost always need to be taken care of, so thanks for pointing those out... hehe. :)

The character profile for this Chapter is Queen Guinevere of Lyntirith played by Michelle Dockery:

Queen Guinevere as Michelle Dockery
I hope you enjoy the next chapter! I've been enjoying getting into the story line and I can't wait to hear your feedback! If you're not caught up to this point yet, you can find previous chapters to the right. :) To read this chapter, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, just say "Chapter 9" and I will give you access to the chapter. :)

Monday, November 10, 2014

Chapter 8

I hope you all had a great weekend. In case you did not see it, I posted an update during the week with a map of the country with the kingdom Eurasia. I may be making some modifications eventually but that's the basic idea for now. :)

Today's character profile is someone who is introduced in this chapter, Prince Corbin of Lyntirith, who I casted as Ben Barnes:

Ben Barnes as Prince Corbin
To read Chapter 8, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, and put "Chapter 8" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!

Friday, November 7, 2014

Eurasia

I thought it might be helpful for you all to see how I pictured the layout of the island Eurasia, so I drew up a basic map. The stars represent where the castles stand and the route with the boat at the southern part may make more sense after you read Chapter 8, coming this Monday. You should be able to click on the image to make it larger so you can see and read it better.

Map of Eurasia

Also, I am going to do a character profile since I haven't the past two posts. This is Freya Parks as Regan, Ellyn's fifteen-year-old sister:

Freya Parks as Regan
I'm excited for you to read Chapter 8! Have a great weekend. :)

Monday, November 3, 2014

Chapter 7

I hope you are all having a great day! :) Sorry for another short post... I will try to post a more lengthy update soon. Thanks to those of you who are taking time to read, and also point out errors and give suggestions! I appreciate it.

To read Chapter 7, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 7" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!

Monday, October 27, 2014

Chapter 6

This will have to be a quick post... I'm about to go pick up my sisters and friends from ballet...

To read Chapter 6, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 6 in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!

Have a great week! I'll probably make up for this short post with another in the middle of this week. And on a side note, today is my little brother's birthday!! Happy 4th Birthday Trent Ethan! <3


Monday, October 20, 2014

Chapter 5

Happy Monday! :)

In case some of you didn't notice, I posted two posts during the week. If you haven't seen them yet, make sure you at least read the one titled "A Slight Change" because I touched on a minor change that will be a part of this chapter.

For today's character profile I chose Ellyn's sister Sybil, cast as Isabelle Allen:

Isabelle Allen as Ellyn's 10 year old sister, Sybil

Since the last chapter ended on a cliff hanger, I'll include the last part of that chapter in case you want to refresh your memory. :) And if you haven't caught up on the first four chapters yet... spoiler alert. :P

Chapter 4 excerpt:
There was a small shuffling. Ellyn’s grip around Julius’s arm tightened and she felt his muscles tense.
            “Ellyn?” a small voice squeaked, sounding nearby, but very muffled.
            “Yes, it’s me, Sybil, where are you? Come out, it’s alright,” Ellyn said, sighing with relief. There was a shuffling nearby and small footsteps approached Ellyn and Julius.
            “Sybil, there you are,” Ellyn said, enfolding her sister tightly in her arms. “It’s alright.”
            “I was afraid,” Sybil said, her voice shaking.
            “I know,” Ellyn said, holding her sister tightly. “We need to go inside now where it’s safe.”
            But a loud crash broke her words. Moonlight flooded through the door as it was pushed open, and a shadow filled the doorway. Ellyn gasped and Julius grabbed her and Sybil and opened the stall door, pushing both of them inside. He pushed them to the ground and closed the door, standing in front of it with his hand on the hilt of his sword. Ellyn squeezed Sybil in her arms, shaking with terror.

To read Chapter 5, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 5" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!

Thursday, October 16, 2014

Medieval Castles

Hi everyone! So thanks for keeping up with the first four chapters. I greatly appreciate all your your very helpful comments for me! Thank you!

I decided to occasionally post a General Update where I give information about the time period, or maybe ask you guys questions, or just give a random update. I don't know what all I'll do with these posts... I guess we'll find out. ;D

Since I have set this novel in the Medieval time period (with fictional names, places and events) I thought I would share some images that will hopefully help you be able to envision some things better.

I looked up quite a few images of Medieval castles so that I had a better idea of how Medieval kings and queens used to live. The Marienburg Castle in Germany is my general idea of the castle at Eurasia where Ellyn lives: very large, surrounded by trees, a courtyard in the center. This castle was built in the mid-1300s and has been very well preserved.

Marienburg Castle

Marienburg Castle

The courtyard at Marienburg castle

There are also some very interesting pictures of the interiors of medieval castles:
castle dungeon
dining hall
Here is a Medieval bedroom, which I thought is a good representation of what Ellyn's room could look like.

And finally, since I didn't do this in my last post, I'll add a quick character profile. One of the characters you have already met is Queen Cordelia, Ellyn's mother, who I cast as Rosamund Pike.
Rosamund Pike as Queen Cordelia
Tune in next Monday for Chapter 5! :)

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

A Slight Change

(there are some spoilers in this post... I would recommend not reading it unless you have caught up with the first four chapters which I have posted :)

I have made a slight change to an aspect of the novel, which involves Julius's past. This part of the story will also come in later, so I'm letting you all know so that it won't be confusing later on.

So originally, Julius had been hiding in the village near the castle Eurasia and was pretty much biding his time until he heard from his advisor Quinn, to give him advice on his next move. The after the battle, King Wulfred invited him to stay at Eurasia for as long as he needed to.

So that has been changed slightly. Instead of having been staying in the village, Julius was actually passing through Eurasia on his way to another kingdom called Brystol. His uncle is king of Brystol and is an ally of Julius's. Here's a "family tree" that might help if you're confused. You should be able to click on the image to make it larger if you have trouble reading the small font. ;)



So... hopefully that helps. While Julius is fleeing to his uncle's in Brystol (disguised as a peasant to avoid recognition), he travels through Eurasia, unaware they they are about to be attacked by the Northmen. When he finds himself in the middle of the battle, and in a not so very safe position, King Wulfred invites him to stay until Quinn arrives to advise him on his next move. Julius does not want to chance travelling through Eurasia when it could be dangerous. So he waits in Eurasia for the arrival of Quinn. If you would like to read the changes I made in the book, I have included Julius's explanation to King Wulfred of his past.

“Then how did you come here?” the king asked. “You are so far from your native land. I’m sure you are aware of the disunity and separation the countries of Eurasia have. I have no knowledge of the affairs that take place among other kingdoms.”        

"The tale you are requesting of me is very complicated, but in short, my father, King Rowan of Veridell, died several years ago, and the throne was taken over by my uncle, now Prince Randall. He is determined to begin a new line of kings, descending from himself, even though he has no right to the throne. I found my life in danger, and fled the kingdom. I have another uncle in the kingdom of Brystol, and he was an ally of my father’s and offered to protect me while I am in danger. My advisor Quinn suggested I dress as a peasant to avoid notice or possible recognition and I have been travelling to Brystol from Veridell. My uncle Randall has sent out men to hunt for me, because as long as I am alive, I am a threat to his plot.”

So at this point in the story, Julius is waiting in Eurasia to hear from Quinn, who he has sent a message to. An important point that is mentioned in the passage above is that the kingdoms are very separate from one another, as King Wulfred said. There is little communication or dealings between them, which is why neither Wulfred nor Julius knew about the affairs in the other's kingdom.

The reason I made this change is to make a part of the story coming up more realistic and possible. Sorry if this was confusing! Feel free to ask questions if you have any. :)

Sunday, October 12, 2014

Chapter 4

Hi everyone! Hope you had a nice weekend. :) Well this will be a short post because it's very late right now. Also, I think I have mentioned this, but I've been doing some editing to my book and long story short, this chapter was constructed entirely this afternoon, so it may be a little rough. I haven't done a lot of proofing on it so I apologize for the mistakes I'm sure you'll find... hehe. I'll be going over it again when I'm feeling more... awake. :D I would add a character profile but it's kind of late and I need to get to bed! I'm planning on doing a general update sometime this week, so I'll do it then. Bye for now. ;)

To read this chapter, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 4" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!


P.S. Some of you maybe be wondering why I posted this on Sunday instead of Monday... usually I get the post ready on Sunday and schedule it to be posted at midnight on Monday, but it's almost midnight anyway so I'm just going to go ahead and post it. ;D

Monday, October 6, 2014

Chapter 3

Happy Monday Everyone! Sorry things have been a little slow to start here (I did call this blog "Writer's Block" for a reason...haha!) but thanks for encouraging me to keep posting! I'm glad I have you all to remind me ... otherwise I would probably put off working on this and possibly not complete it! Thank you also for your very helpful critiques and advice. I've read over the chapters so much, that I don't have a very fresh perspective. So it's very helpful to receive feedback from those of you reading for the first time.


Anyway, a character that you will read a lot about in Chapter 3 is Ellyn's brother Ivor, who I have cast as Freddie Stroma:

Freddie Stroma as Ivor
To read this chapter, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 3" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter! Don't forget - critiques are greatly appreciated. :) Thanks everyone! Have a great week!

Thursday, September 25, 2014

Chapter Two

I am so sorry it has taken me so long to post the second chapter! Right after I posted the first, I had an idea for a change to the next few chapters, and it took a little while to actual happen, especially with school!! But don't worry! The first draft of Chapter 2 is ready! :) I'll try to continue posting every Monday still. If you haven't read Chapter 1 yet, you should be able to scroll down and see my previous post, or check under the Blog Archive to the right.

An important character in this chapter is named Julius, and I have cast him as Bradley James.

Bradley James as Prince Julius.He's around 18-19....
Bradley James as "Julius"
To read this chapter, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 2" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter. :)

--Rachel



Monday, September 1, 2014

Chapter One

Happy Labor Day! I know for some of you this is your last day before school starts... so I hope this week is a smooth transition for you!

As I said in my first post, I am just finishing the rough draft of my book, so this is by no means the finished product. Here are some things I encourage you to look for while reading.

1. Spelling or grammar errors I may have missed
2. Sentence structure problems. In other words, if a sentence doesn't make sense or could be clearer.
3. Not enough detail. If a particular scene lacks detail, for instance if you are having trouble envisioning what is happening.
4. If you have ideas for scenes I could add in (or take out).
5. This novel is fictional with fictional people and places, but I have a medieval time frame in mind while writing. So if there is anything that you think goes against the general medieval feel, let me know!

These are just ideas. I am sharing this with you as a step in the polishing process of my novel, so please share any ideas or critiques you have. :)


In this chapter, one of the characters you will meet is Alys (pronounced Alice).

Rose Leslie as Alys, Ellyn's maidservant
To read this chapter, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 1" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!

~Rachel :)

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

An introduction

Starting next week, I will be posting a chapter every Monday of my novel, which I am just finishing the rough draft for. This is so that you all can read it and give me advice! Feel free to offer suggestions of any kind, whether it is a grammatical or spelling error I have missed, or something more major:  additional detail in a particular scene, a new scene altogether, something to remove, a new character, a new plot twist, ANYTHING! :) Please do not hesitate to give me suggestions, I would appreciate it very much. You can either comment with advice, or send an email. Either would be great!

I have made a "cast" of all of my characters, just so you can see how I imagine them. So, I will include an image of the actress I have cast as my main character: Amanda Seyfried.  


Amanda Seyfried as Ellyn of Eurasia



Tune in next week for chapter one of my currently untitled novel!  I will occasionally be posting character profiles and general updates as well.


~Rachel :)