Happy Monday! :)
In case some of you
didn't notice, I posted two posts during the week. If you haven't seen them
yet, make sure you at least read the one titled "A Slight Change"
because I touched on a minor change that will be a part of this chapter.
For today's character
profile I chose Ellyn's sister Sybil, cast as Isabelle Allen:
Since the last chapter
ended on a cliff hanger, I'll include the last part of that chapter in case you
want to refresh your memory. :) And if you haven't caught up on the first four
chapters yet... spoiler alert. :P
Chapter 4 excerpt:
There was a small
shuffling. Ellyn’s grip around Julius’s arm tightened and she felt his muscles
tense.
“Ellyn?” a small voice squeaked, sounding nearby, but very
muffled.
“Yes, it’s me, Sybil, where are you? Come out, it’s
alright,” Ellyn said, sighing with relief. There was a shuffling nearby and
small footsteps approached Ellyn and Julius.
“Sybil, there you are,” Ellyn said, enfolding her sister
tightly in her arms. “It’s alright.”
“I was afraid,” Sybil said, her voice shaking.
“I know,” Ellyn said, holding her sister tightly. “We need
to go inside now where it’s safe.”
But a loud crash broke her words. Moonlight flooded
through the door as it was pushed open, and a shadow filled the doorway. Ellyn
gasped and Julius grabbed her and Sybil and opened the stall door, pushing both
of them inside. He pushed them to the ground and closed the door, standing in
front of it with his hand on the hilt of his sword. Ellyn squeezed Sybil in her
arms, shaking with terror.
To read Chapter 5, fill out the contact form to the right and in the message, put "Chapter 5" in the body of the message and I will give you access to the chapter!
Haha, I love Julius. I just have to say that. :) My only other comment was the last sentence on page 2 needs a 'who' right after mother, I believe. Can't wait for next week!
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